tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post115851349593547840..comments2023-09-12T06:18:38.552-04:00Comments on The World in the Satin Bag: Chapter One: Hansor ManorAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13571452656553970472noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-84700434083880713502011-06-09T14:38:13.868-04:002011-06-09T14:38:13.868-04:00Thanks, Maham. This is an old version, though. T...Thanks, Maham. This is an old version, though. The newer version is in the podcast. Much cleaner...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13571452656553970472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-50369481822062093812011-06-09T13:55:52.330-04:002011-06-09T13:55:52.330-04:00brilliant! Amazing! Charming! Cool! ...brilliant! Amazing! Charming! Cool! <br /> i particularly liked the bloodshot eye, and laura is a cool character. James doesn't meet expectations much...no offence. Love the bag and that it was so heavy.mahamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-26486488710914567982010-09-03T15:27:52.091-04:002010-09-03T15:27:52.091-04:00The next chapter is already up. I'm getting l...The next chapter is already up. I'm getting late to responding, but so be it. You can actually read the whole book now if you so choose. Or ignore it :PAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13571452656553970472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-14508467851071858422009-10-30T22:56:30.306-04:002009-10-30T22:56:30.306-04:00Wow, love your detail, I cannot wait for chapter 2...Wow, love your detail, I cannot wait for chapter 2. Keep writing :)A Mom's Choicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04457208636628567188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-62659142774128719152009-02-22T12:38:00.000-05:002009-02-22T12:38:00.000-05:00Well you're welcome to offer all the critiques you...Well you're welcome to offer all the critiques you like :P. It's not illegal or anything. The novel was an experiment (a good one, I might add), so fixing it up is still something I'd like to do one day.<BR/><BR/>Anywho!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13571452656553970472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-40172955273256075892009-02-22T05:08:00.000-05:002009-02-22T05:08:00.000-05:00Well, to be completely honest, I was browsing thro...Well, to be completely honest, I was browsing through some old posts on TW and came across your book reviews. <BR/><BR/>I've only read the first chapter, but I like the idea. It's got potential ;^). <BR/><BR/>I'm not an amazing writer or anything, but I'd definitely be willing to offer a critique on the first couple of chapters if you were interested. <BR/><BR/>p.s. - If I'm committing some kind of faux pas by offering my critiquing services, I apologize in advance :p.Chelseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754174688581322351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-43118053779061813662009-02-22T05:05:00.000-05:002009-02-22T05:05:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Chelseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754174688581322351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-17124507290886864492009-02-22T04:01:00.000-05:002009-02-22T04:01:00.000-05:00Out of pure curiosity, how'd you find this particu...Out of pure curiosity, how'd you find this particular post? And what did you think (because I'm always wondering what people think of my work, even old, antiquated things that will eventually need a stylistic overhaul)?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13571452656553970472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-54148094879121870152009-02-22T03:48:00.000-05:002009-02-22T03:48:00.000-05:00You're welcome :+).You're welcome :+).Chelseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754174688581322351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-91348472345917174412009-02-22T03:18:00.000-05:002009-02-22T03:18:00.000-05:00And you would be correct, which is why I am going ...And you would be correct, which is why I am going to fix that right now. Thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13571452656553970472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-12732126157291452472009-02-22T03:00:00.000-05:002009-02-22T03:00:00.000-05:00I'm pretty sure it's "sewn" not "sown".I'm pretty sure it's "sewn" not "sown".Chelseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754174688581322351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33813337.post-1158597934660526712006-09-18T12:45:00.000-04:002006-09-18T12:45:00.000-04:00Okay I'm hooked. Let's have the next chapter.Okay I'm hooked. Let's have the next chapter.Dane Bramagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06368506914343732128noreply@blogger.com